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Friday 8 December 2017

Click here to view my description of Polyfest!


  • Polyfest is packed with happy, joyful children and adults.
  • The music coming from the Maori stage sounds very alluring.
  • Watching the performances is like sitting in a cinema watching an action movie.
  • The food smells so delicious, just like being in a cafe that is filled with chocolate.
  • The Polynesian students looks very charming and elegant in their costumes.
  • The bright colours of the students' costumes attracts everyone's attention.
  • The sound of children cheering for their friends and families fills the air with joy.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write seven descriptive sentences to describe the  Polynesian Festival.

Monday 4 December 2017

You can use similes to describe a setting or a character!


  • Daniel is a rugby player who plays for the RLWC Tongan team 'Mate Maa Tonga'.
  • A fit athlete who can run 400 meters without stopping.
  • He is very muscular and strong, so strong that he can lift up a  table.
  • He is as tall as a giraffe.
  • Daniel's voice is very deep and he sounds like an gorilla.
  • A proud Tongan who shows a lot of pride by wearing traditional Tongan clothes (Tau'o'vala.)
  • Daniel shows a lot of commitment to his rugby league team by always turning up for training and games on time.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write seven descriptive sentences to describe Daniel Tupou.