- The crystal pool water is like the deep blue sea.
- The immense pool can be filled with over 67 children.
- The sound of children's bodies splashing into the water sounds like rain coming down from the sky.
- The pool water freezes your body like an ice sculpture.
- The sky is so clear that the reflection from the sun makes the water sparkle as bright as a diamond.
- As children dive into the crystal blue basin, the ripple of the water gets bigger.
Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description.
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write 6 descriptive sentences to describe a pool.
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