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Thursday 16 November 2017

You can use Onomatopoeias to describe any setting or item!



  • The crystal pool water is like the deep blue sea.
  • The immense pool can be filled with over 67 children.
  • The sound of children's bodies splashing into the water sounds like rain coming down from the sky.
  • The pool water freezes your body like an ice sculpture.
  • The sky is so clear that the reflection from the sun makes the water sparkle as bright as a diamond.
  • As children dive into the crystal blue basin, the ripple of the water gets bigger.

Learning Intention: We are learning to write a description. 
Success Criteria: I know I can do this when I write 6 descriptive sentences to describe a pool.

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